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Tuesday, May 8, 2018

New Release + Review - On the Ice by Amy Aislin

Length: 87,000 word approx.


For college sophomore Mitch Greyson, determination and persistence are the name of the game if he wants to make it as a professional hockey player. A busy schedule of practices, games, classes, homework, two part-time jobs—and now, working with a tutor to help him pass the class he’s failing so that he can keep his scholarship—shouldn’t leave him with enough time to flirt with the NHL player in town. But that doesn’t stop him.

Placed on the injured reserve list until his broken arm heals, NHL defenseman Alex Dean is using the time off to be with his ailing grandfather and get a head start on the book he’s been commissioned to write. He doesn’t expect to get roped into a tutoring gig, especially not for cocky, smart-ass Mitch. 

But Alex soon discovers that there’s more to Mitch than meets the eye...and he really likes what he sees. Only Alex doesn’t dare risk his NHL career by coming out, and a relationship between them would jeopardize Mitch’s chances with the organization too.

It looks impossible. Then again, the best things usually do...


“Good game against Colgate,” Alex said, pocketing his phone.

The mask slipped off Mitch’s face. “You were there?”

Alex shook his head. “Watched it on TV.”

Holy crap! An NHL player—Mitch’s hockey crush, no less—had watched his game. At a loss for words, Mitch stood there blinking at Alex like a putz.

“You’ve got impressive foot work,” Alex said.

Mitch continued to blink at him.

“You skated circles around Colgate and that goal in the third?” Alex smiled wide. “You broke Colgate’s end as if the defensemen were pylons. It was beautiful.”

“I—” Mitch cleared his throat. “Well, McCall passed me the puck at just the right time, so… I mean, I did figure skating for years and…” He had no idea what he was trying to say.

“Huh. I know a couple of guys who did some figure skating after their game slipped and it helped them rebound. It’s something I’ve been considering to improve my foot speed.” Alex leaned a shoulder against the wall and crossed his arms, but his cast got in the way so he ended up shoving one hand in his pocket and letting the casted one dangle. “Your training shows in your footwork. How else has it helped your game?”

In total disbelief that an NHL player was asking him for advice, Mitch said, “Figure skating is about using edges and your body to change direction on the ice. It’s about learning to cut a corner or to pivot the right way while maintaining your speed. It made me a better skater.” 

“It shows.”

God, the compliments were going to go to Mitch’s head.

“What made you decide to stick with hockey instead of figure skating?”

Mitch shrugged and told the truth. “I liked hockey better.”

“Could you do a triple axel in full hockey gear?” Alex asked, a teasing grin on his face.

Mitch had to laugh. “I’ve never tried.” But now he was itching to. 

“No? What about a—” Alex held his index finger up and moved it in small circles, “—with the leg out in front?”

“A sit spin?” Mitch scratched his head. “I actually think that one might be harder than the triple axel in full hockey gear.”

They stood there smiling at each other for a moment, Alex’s eyes the color of the Green Mountains in summer. The man was too gorgeous for words and he was nice to boot. Mitch couldn’t help staring at Alex’s mouth, red and surprisingly soft in an otherwise rugged face.

Alex cleared his throat and edged around Mitch. “I’ve got to get back to my friend.”

“Wait, I—” The hallway was empty so Mitch plastered his sex smile back on his face, walked right into Alex’s personal space, and put a hand on Alex’s hip. “Why don’t you come over tonight and we’ll—”

Alex palmed Mitch’s shoulders and pushed him away. “Look, kid—”

“I’m not a kid.”

Mitch.” Alex held him at arm’s length. “Whatever it is you’re trying to do here, it’s not going to happen. I don’t even know you.”

“What difference does that make?”

Alex dropped his arms. “I don’t jump into bed with people I don’t know. Hell, I don’t even jump into bed with people I do know.”

Alex wasn’t saying I’m not gay, but it did sound like he was saying I’m asexual or something similar, which left Mitch exactly nowhere.

May 15 - Joyfully Jay


I want to get the negative out of the way first, just to rip that band-aid off. 

In the beginning, I thought Mitch was kind of creepy/sleazy when it came to Alex. He was very off-putting in his come-ons and it wasn't very pleasant to read. It also didn't really co-inside with his actual personality and his drive to succeed. He was a hockey player on a scholarship for a science major. He thinks math as fun and can talk nerdy all day long. The two, to me, just didn't jive.

The over use of Mama Jeans. I get it, it's college, but for cornsakes there has to be other restaurants/cafes that the kids hang out at. I swear for gods I gained 10# just reading it. And sooo many smoothies! how we're these guys in sports!? There's no way that's sustaining an athlete.

Mitch's mom was such a bitch, so much so that it felt over the top. Maybe people are really like that, Probably. And I know, this is fiction, but holy cow! Evil, that one. 

Now that that is out of the way! Let's get to the good stuff. 

Geoff Greyson, Mitch's dad. I loooved him. I don't know how he put up with that woman, but he did, for far too long. He loves his sons and he does what he can to make them happy. It would also help of he knew what was happening in the background to make things better, but how can he if no one tells him. Of course his son's being who they are just wanted to protect everyone else. #teamdad

Cody, Mitch's BFF. He's the friend you WANT to have. Always has his back no matter what, but yet he can be real with him, no coddling here. 

Once you get beyond Mitch's walls, he's actually a pretty funny, sweet guy. I caught myself belly laughing a few times. He's determined to make it on his own and on his own terms. It's admirable, but also bad for your health if you're not careful. My heart also broke for him and his brother, Dan.

Watching Mitch and Alex's relationship bloom was nothing short of sweet. The only real "downs" to their relationship we're outside forces that had nothing to do with them as a couple. 

Yes this is a hockey book, but it also shows the guys passions outside of hockey. What will they do in a future without it? You have Mitch who's all "math and science genius" and Alex the creative writer. So very different, but they seem to work. 

The ending is very sweet. They still seemed to have kept their relationship out of the limelight while playing sports, just family and a few friends knew. It was all very low angst and kind of cozy. 

I'm not sure who's next, but I would definitely continue on with the series. 
(I have a feeling it's Jay)

Amy started writing on a rainy day in fourth grade when her class was forced to stay inside for recess. Tales of adventures with her classmates quickly morphed into tales of adventures with the characters in her head. Based in the suburbs of Toronto, Amy is a marketer/fundraiser at a large environmental non-profit in Toronto by day, and a writer by night. Book enthusiast, animal lover and (very) amateur photographer, her interests are many and varied, including travelling, astronomy, ecology, and baking. She binge watches too much anime, and loves musical theater, Julie Andrews, the Backstreet Boys, and her hometown of Oakville, Ontario.

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1 comment:

  1. Congrats on the new release! Thank you for the excerpt!